Lang-8 2 Self-Reflection

I did what I intended to with this post, in that I used a fair variety of grammar forms that we have learned recently, thus re-enforcing my ability to use them correctly: stem-やすい、ながら、なら (which I changed to たら in my revisions)、てすぎる、ことが出来る. This time around I had a few errors involving choosing between conditional forms, particles, and past vs. non-past conjugation. However, in general I did a good job of expressing the processes I was trying to describe (when it came to each food item) so I think I was successful in that regard.